It’s Time
You always said everything was going to be okay,
That things will work and everything will be fine.
but it’s not.
I’m engulfed in questions.
Every kid wonders,
Is it my fault?
What happened?
Is there anything I can do?
I love my dad,
Nobody can replace him.
They all try,
But nobody can fill his shoes.
I won’t be happy,
I feel helpless,
overpowered,
overwhelmed.
But time has come,
It’s time,
I’m gone…..
1. This is just a generalization about all of my step dads and how they all try to fill his shoes, but fail. What else can I do to make it seem more poetic?
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This is good, i can relate to thisin a way, only with step moms. You could add more emotion to make it stronger?
ReplyDeletei get that, i know what it feels like
ReplyDeletecause there lame an think they can tell you what to do. add more of what it feels like to have a step dad. or what it makes you feel, but i like it